April 3rd, 2008
GOODBYE CRESTFALLEN (PAGE 013)

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19 Responses to “GOODBYE CRESTFALLEN (PAGE 013)”
    • Sam Says:
      April 3rd, 2008 at 2:41 am

      The blue shading on Sera’s hair is so pretty here… actually, all the shading/textures are very nice, but I’m really fond of that blue.

    • Candy Says:
      April 3rd, 2008 at 1:42 pm

      Hm…I never thought of that advantage to being a wtich - putting your broken stuff back together.

      Would’ve helped when my first PS1 broke.

      Also, I love the way you draw lips.

      Yeah…I make weird comments on people’s art XD

    • Tabris Says:
      April 3rd, 2008 at 5:46 pm

      I can’t help but wonder how long it took to draw the detail on the chair…

      Either way, it looks awesome. Kelton’s bag looks about like mine with all the buttons, heh.

    • Chato Says:
      April 3rd, 2008 at 10:43 pm

      Very nice page.

      Those armchair squigglies must’ve taken some serious attention to detail time.

      Any plans on more Humbly action?

    • Johanna Says:
      April 3rd, 2008 at 11:21 pm

      Sera looks so badass now. Yay for Kelton! I seriously love that blue color, it’s so pretty! xD

    • Shannon M. Says:
      April 4th, 2008 at 5:20 pm

      Looking at the raw page, I wonder why you changed the panel from that page to this new one…ah well, either way, I like it. XD Sera’s blue hair is really stickin’ out here~

    • John Says:
      April 5th, 2008 at 6:45 am

      I can’t wait to see how “Goodbye Crestfallen” is gonna turn out.

      By the way, love the art on this and the earlier issues (especially where Sera attacks those guys with ectoplasm. Sweet!)

      Keep it comin’ Aaron!

    • Ginger Says:
      April 5th, 2008 at 8:52 am

      I have always loved Serenity Rose, and I love the new design work on all the characters. I can’t wait for the next page.

    • LogicalDash Says:
      April 5th, 2008 at 9:27 pm

      The graininess in the margins gives this page a nice 4am feel. Did you put that there, or did the paper come like that, or what?

    • Kuro Says:
      April 6th, 2008 at 4:52 pm

      Awesome work as ever. Sera’s back and cute as ever. The blue really is nice. I can’t wait to consoom it all in book form.

    • Relenz Says:
      April 8th, 2008 at 3:50 pm

      The text is a bit weird…It’s strange to see someone digress and switch between emotional states in a single balloon, I’m more used to using the balloons to help separate thoughts- I actually had to read Sera’s explanation a few times before I could parse its meaning. Of course, that may also be because the characters seem to be having an attack of chronic ellipsis.

    • essrose Says:
      April 10th, 2008 at 12:39 am

      Relenz: You mean like the part where she says her heart is racing?

      “Attack of the Chronic Ellipsis” would be a great title for book three…

    • Relenz Says:
      April 12th, 2008 at 12:55 am

      Yes, exactly-the inclusion within the bubble may be a means of conveying that it’s an interruption of the thought, but that doesn’t come across easily. If sera’s interrupting her thought or sentence, I’d find it easier to read if there was some visual interruption in the bubble, or alternately, if dashes were used instead of ellipses: because ellipses are used so much earlier on in the panel to signify pauses or smaller interruptions, the mind’s eye skips over them and assumes the sentence just continues. The reader sees like…um…like… and is trained to think that ellipses don’t mean significant interruptions, just brief pauses, like commas. As a result, it read at first as:

      It’s like, um, like, god my heart is racing it’s like my body is paralyzed etc.

      …Chronic Ellipsis must be what the silent protagonist had in all those games I played as a kid…

      Also, I have too many opinions. meep.

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