Comments on: GOODBYE CRESTFALLEN (PAGE 019)

By: ImagineTheEnding

ImagineTheEnding — Sat, 03 May 2008 17:59:38 +0000

If I were to tell the whole truth I don’t like where this page is placed in the comic. I think this should be the first page, or the beginning of a chapter. But that’s just me!

Otherwise, yeah good as always…but I say that for every page, haha.

By: essrose

essrose — Sat, 03 May 2008 06:40:55 +0000

It wasn’t really a conscious choice, no (I’m not sure every page IS a cliffhanger, technically). I do remember reading somewhere that the last panel of every comic page should give the reader a good reason to turn the page, so maybe that’s affecting me subconsciously. Seems like a good idea for a weekly webcomic, anyway…

By: Relenz

Relenz — Fri, 02 May 2008 17:06:32 +0000

Ah, but I read Ulysses in elementary school…It probably is my network, I’ll see what can be done on my end of the tube.

…yes, singular, tube. It’s a very bad network, you see.

On an unrelated note, the pocketwatch tempts me with cliffhanger-y goodness. Was it a conscious choice to have a hook at the end of every page this time around?

By: Cujunga

Cujunga — Fri, 02 May 2008 16:25:41 +0000

*drools profusely on the page* - by the by - - my computer loads the page very nicely ~ though I know I could use with some more reading - I do agree with the comment about what does this have to do with the last page, but I know I’ll just have to WAIT! *cry!*

By: essrose

essrose — Thu, 01 May 2008 03:58:35 +0000

Aw, I thought we had the slowness thing all sorted out now… There haven’t been any complaints since I cut all the image sizes in half and had Dreamhost move me to a less crowded server. That was over a month ago.

Not sure what more I can do at this point. Anybody else still having problems (that can’t, y’know, be traced to your own slow computer/network/whatever), or is it just Relenz?

BTW, Relenz, did it ever occur to you that you might BENEFIT from reading a few extra books while waiting for my site to load? That copy of Ulysses isn’t going to read itself, you know.

By: Relenz

Relenz — Thu, 01 May 2008 02:47:12 +0000

BTW, if folks want me to return to the forums, they’ll have to make it so I can no longer read a book in the time it takes for each page on the site to load.

By: MrThumbtack

MrThumbtack — Thu, 01 May 2008 02:19:41 +0000

Charles-Without-End or someone related to him, was obviously talking to Sera in the beginning.

Gahh, you’re gonna drive us nuts with the mystery now, Mr. A.

By: Relenz

Relenz — Thu, 01 May 2008 01:41:40 +0000

…I’m actually kind of surprised Mr. A has decided to make the motives of the antagonist-apparent so immediately obvious.

By: Speck

Speck — Wed, 30 Apr 2008 23:07:38 +0000

I’m gonna go out on a limb here and guess that whoever was talking to Sera in the first couple pages was Charles-Without-End. ‘Cause there’s no way that the original Crestfallen inhabitants completely wiped themselves out, and both Charles and Sera’s mysterious mentor have funky tattoos around their eyes.

By: jabberwok art

jabberwok art — Wed, 30 Apr 2008 22:31:34 +0000

what does this have to do with the previous page…
it seems kinda choppy, but it’s good.