Su-bob's Spookies

[Zante]

just like before, tres magnefique! i like i really do. you should be very proud of yourself little one

[subobeyliminal]

maybe I'm a typical sequential art bastard
but I'd like to see more movement and action

but I'm not your editor

More movement? Well...she is going to be walking to school in the next chapter... And she shall be jumping over a wall...and falling over a trashcan....it will be good fun.

I agree with you...this chapter was quite stationary...even though she walked through a park...O_o Guess I jus' forgot to show her legs moving...ah well.


::sniff:: I wish I HAD an editor...::dreams:: But y'know, I LOVE constructive crit...tear it appart if you know your stuff! I need all the help I can get...::hangs "amateur" sign around her neck::

[Zante]

i still love your work, but to make it a little more interesting you could try varying the angles you use. not only does it make it a bit more stylised, but it's also a really good way of conveying emotions.
but like i said i still love your work!... i suck when i try different angles

[subobeyliminal]

Really? Different angles aren't that hard to do...though, I'm terrible at looking down on/up at a character....only in realism can I do those angles, because the style of these characters doesn't allow for it...

Thanks for that though....quite helpful. And you really don't need to sugar-coat it, I'm in drama. I can take it. XD (audition most indefinately means rejection.)

[Zante]

Well then in that caseyou suck so bad dammit! why don't you give up these ridiculous dreams of being an artist.... DAMMIT!
lol nah i still really like your work, but yeah i think the angle thing is a good thing.

i'm pretty bad at trying to change my pictures to high or low angles. but hey i'm working on it

[subobeyliminal]

Now THAT'S more like it!

Yes...angles are fun...oh, but one of my favourite things to do in realism is the pose where the subject's head is pointed up, so they get that neat jaw-line...takes a while to get the hang of it, but it's a great pose. ::nod::

[Zante]

want another one?
Give up Already!
ooh i'm enjoying this!

yes, i've always been a fan of the jaw line. especially on a guy, a particularly hot guy. mmm with the good hard jaw line and uh... oops am i saying all this out loud? he he he my bad

[subobeyliminal]

A jaw line, or a hip bone, or...

Oh dear. ::changes pants:: XD

[Zante]

hahahaha

oh yeah jaw line, eyes, cheek bones uh ::runs out of room for fresh air::

[ryhmy]

Urgh... Low angles are a bitch, a living hell to draw... Maybe I should study more anatomy





And yes: we all like bones
Maybe I should make gallery consisting only of pictures of cheek, hip, and jawbones. 25 dollars for a months membership at bonefetish.org

No, but really: I know what you mean. Hip bones (in a female body) are indeed pretty hot

[subobeyliminal]

Yeah, female hip bones are sexy...mine stick out...but I'm no grass-hopper...I just lost 20 pounds after surgery. XD

Bone fetish...O_o

Low angles = HEAD EXPLOSION!
I swear. I seen it before. ::shifty eyes::

[Zante]

Urgh... Low angles are a bitch, a living hell to draw... Maybe I should study more anatomy

i know i need to.
and how do i sign up for this bonefetish place huh?

Low angles = HEAD EXPLOSION!
I swear. I seen it before. ::shifty eyes::

i think i saw it on the news once!!!
and what surgery did you have? are yous alls better now?

[subobeyliminal]

I had back surgery...but I'm getting better. ::nods::

New comic! With craaaazy experimental camera angle! Whoo!

[Zante]

hope you're feeling lots better ey
once again i'm loving your stuff. and the whole crazy camera angle thing really works, it really makes it more interesting! for a second i thought you drew butnut at some crazy angle, then i realised he was hanging upside down hehe i'm smart.

Good Work

[subobeyliminal]

Upside down shall RULE YOU ALL!

::ahem:: I like drawing acorns.