williamthebloody wrote:
WOW! That's AWESOME! <3 <3 <3
yet again, your power of color astonishes me!
mmm juicy bubblegum pink.
I love how the pony looks like a my little pony!
I love them little ponies so much.
Vicious WOULD like my little ponies. she would indeed.
Her shoes are to perfect, as well as the tea-cup.
She seems a little separated from the pony, however.
Almost as if the pony is more of a background rather than something
she's sitting on..
it looks like you've tried to curve her arm around the mane, making it look a little unnaturally bent.
Drawing the mane (either in photoshop or in the rough)
of the pony a little in front of her arm and giving it an appearance of being
slightly transparent could aid in creating the illusion of space and placement.
you could go even farther and do the same to her bottom,
making her look as if she is draped over the pony's back.
one more thing and I'll stop ripping into your beautiful piece, Williamthebloody.
as it is obvious by my terrible photoshop skillz,
I am a huge fan of making things look like they are glowing.
especially in the case of ectoplasm!
I think by creating a light blur of an object's color, either around the object
or on a non-glowing object nearby, it can create a subtle yet
unmistakable difference in the illusion of space.
I think this is b/c objects do this, in fact, in real life.
Ish called "local color". (you have probably already heard this)
objects naturally reflect color on things around them.
so yea...if she had a little pink tint to her skin where it is
closest to the pony, it'd REALLY sell the illusion yo where going for.
Wonderful job, again!
I think you has a fan....
TEIM:
I love the pose! you've really successfully made her look at peace!
(especially considering what kind of sleep Sera's been getting lately)
that pose is a very difficult one to pull off and make it look natural and confident.
challenging yourself with different poses is a perfect way to improve your skillz.
The blue in her hair is great, as well. I love blue. so very. very. much.
One thing I'd love to see in future art postings of yours...
contrast.
I think by bumping up the contrast between those darks and lights you'd really see a world of difference,
and I think your drawings would simply pop right off the background!
I also think that if her head was moved slightly to the right on her neck/body
that relaxing pose would be completely sold.
right now her body kind of appears as if it is laying aside her head,
like they are detached somehow.
regardless of my nit-picky suggestions,
I really like your unique animation style and I can't wait to see more from you, esp your pony theme!
Alphatroll:
WOW.
this is one action-packed picture!
I ALWAYS have trouble coming up with new and interesting scenes/poses.
great job!
I really like the touch-ups you've done, the flames look ridiculously awesome and for some
reason I keep expecting them to spell out something.
I think it's b/c the way you've drawn them is VERY similar to
a style of graffiti typography, here's some close examples of what I mean:
graffiti typography can be much more intricate than that, even!
(not my art btw-found on google)
I'm betting you could probably do some CRAZY-awesome graffiti art.
I can just imagine this drawing painted 6ftx6ft (or bigger!) on a wall with the
fire spelling out some phrase or even your name!
you've definitely got the stuff to go for bigger projects, to say the least!
really, the only thing I can nit-pick about is maybe some work on anatomy
(or in stylized animation's case- a "formula".)
and that stuff just comes with time, patience, and practice.
keep up the awesome work!
Alphatroll: It can be REALLY hard to find motivation and inspiration sometimes..
art blocks are definitely a force to be reckoned with,
however, if you keep that sketchbook near and keep reading/looking at/playing/ listening to things...
the inspiration will come and that block will melt away.
I'd love to see anything you've come up with!
if it doesn't relate to this topic, post it in Soiled Heart Road!
* As for me.......
I still have nothing.
I've been working on my costume, two projects for my niece,
another secret-sexy-sera project, and soon-to-be-painting for my sister...
along with several other projects that are on the sidelines right now..
I REALLY want to do this, but right now I've got WAAAAY to much
on my plate, and I'm afraid that if I start another new project,
I won't finish the ones I'm working on.
Either way, I'm really enjoying the work you all are producing,
and I can't wait to see more!



